Atlas Shrugged Part III Galt Speech
Posted by deleted 12 years, 8 months ago to Movies
Any opinions or details on how Galt's speech will be handled in the movie? The actual speech is quite lengthy and so may not be exactly reasonable for the movie, but is arguably the best and most important part of the novel. So, how will this be handled? Will it be shortened to appeal to the viewer or kept lengthy for the Objectivist fans?
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The more I learn about philosophy, the more I understand the arguments that need to be addressed. Ultimately, all these arguments would have to be addressed for the book to be complete.
Just suppose we on here were a democratic collective voting on how to do Part III.
How many eons would it take for a coherent plan to come out?
Luckily, we know the film producers have also thought hard about it and there is a good team.
I saw a film called What the Bleep years ago, which I adore, which is done with similar production values even though its a documentary of a sort. The Atlas films get people talking, which is what really matters for Objectivism. I think Aglialoro could make this film as popular as a other kinds of movies that are clearly inspired by Atlas, like Star Wars, and any of the early Clint Eastwood films. But he makes the film he wants because its his money, his values and his effort. He has the rights, he worked to get them, and he's doing his best to make a film that the establishment wants to see destroyed. Objectivists by nature have a tendency to say F**k O** to everyone anyway, so they don't pad the egos of worthless go-betweens, and this does have an impact on the product. I can see it clearly in every shot of the films---and I like it that way. There's a chip on the shoulder of the Atlas films that I find refreshing and I find honor in the fact that it pisses off most of the rest of society. I like that! Clearly, John Aglialoro and Harmon Kaslow do too. They are making a film that most of society will reject, so that has more to do with the box office than anything else. Even if the film was made with Steven Spielberg as the director, and the special effects were done by Industrial Light and Magic, people would still hate this film, because they hate the message. If Angalina Jolie was playing Dagney, like she was slated to do when Aglialoro bought the rights, people would still hate the film. There is a reason that people like Clint Eastwood and Jolie did not put themselves into Atlas--even though they could. Because the established left would have ruined their careers. Look what happened to Mel Gibson after he made The Passion. He was wild and crazy before he made that film. But after, he was a threat to secular progressivism, and they cut his noogies off for going against the machine. They ignored Mel Gibsons antics before The Passion, after, they smeared him at every turn. That is how the left attacks those who go against them.
Aglialoro is going against the machine to make Atlas. So if he wants to thumb his nose at the machine and make his film the way he wants to make it in spite of what others think.......that's his right. Consumers can decide to buy or reject the product. For that reason, I will see Atlas Part Three at least 5 to 10 times, as I have parts One and Two. And I will enjoy them for the trace of attitude they have with every frame of film and the very subtle F**K O** that I can see there. Because it reflects my thoughts as well.
My 2C - I think Darren raised good points. I don't understand the animosity towards them. He's being critical of how the movies have been produced (literal transcription) and fears handling the part 3 speech in this manner will be a disaster. So what? Aren't we here to discuss? The movies can take some criticism. If you think the movies have been well produced, then argue about why you think they have been. You'd think he was advocating some socialist viewpoint for the way the reaction has been in opposition to his comments.
My 2C - the speech is the climax of the movie - of course it needs to be in there. The speech is much too long in BOOK form, and there is no way carrying that into the movie adaptation is a good idea.
It seem to me that 1995 Showtime adaptation of Harrison Bergeron handled a similar scene quite well. I can't remember how long the scene lasted. If done RIGHT...if the scene holds your attention...I can see it lasting for up to 5-10 minutes. But it can't be pure monologue.
Too bad for you, because you've clearly missed the point of having a rational discussion with anyone whose opinions differ from yours. The reason WHY a person would choose to pay good money to see the films, is because the book so strongly resonated with something within them.
That's absolutely true. And of course the time to be thinking about solutions is before the problems start.
Here's how a more experienced (not to mention competent) producer would have approached this project:
1) Unless you're adapting the novel as a miniseries (with e.g., 10 episodes), there's no way you can — or should; or need to — tell the entire story of AS. You want to create ONE standalone movie that tells the "gist" of what the novel's dramatic plot is about. So the first question is this: in dramatic terms, what is AS about? No, it's not, *dramatically speaking*, about the Men of the Mind disappearing because they are on strike. "Drama" involves conflict, and there is no conflict involved in the men of the mind going on strike. I don't remember anyone physically trying to stop them from disappearing; they simply have these conversations with a mysterious figure and decide to follow him. There's NO conflict in this, hence, there's NO drama. The "strike" events of AS are analogous to the WWII events of "Casablanca." They are the background context in which some other dramatic story involving conflict is taking place. So out of all the events in AS, which episode, or perhaps "subplot" best sums up your feelings and thoughts about the novel?
It's not an easy question to answer because there are a number of episodes that could serve as THE essential story. So we might narrow the focus this way:
WHOSE story is it? Which character travels the greatest "arc" in terms of starting out as one kind of person who seeks a goal, meets many obstacles, and ends up as another kind of person, having prevailed against the obstacles, and during which, a specific character trait is "tested"? I think it's obvious: I think it's Dagny. It's her story. AS is not about a strike, or John Galt; it's about a businesswoman who runs a railroad.
Now we focus this even more: what does Dagny want? What's her main goal?
Again, there are several contenders, but I think the one that best answers to the needs of being "drama" — which involves a conflict of wills with antagonists who oppose the hero's goal — is the building of the John Galt Line.
Now, there may be other choices for all of these, but had the producers narrowed the focus of the film to Dagny's desire to build the John Galt Line — JUST THAT — and spent some screen-time actually exploring and developing that entire episode, there would have been "cinematic breathing room" for developing her character more, developing her involvement with Rearden, developing Rearden more, developing the poisonous relationship he had with his wife, etc., and instead of these ciphers stiffly moving around on screen standing around talking to one another, there could have been some real character development, but the GOAL of the main character (Dagny) would be narrower and more focused. And as for the Men of the Mind disappearing when Dagny needed their help for her Line, that could be handled in the same way as people disappearing in "Casablanca" because the Gestapo had picked them up: simply a horrible part of the background context in which the main story is taking place, but something that needs no more explanation because THAT WOULD ENTAIL MAKING ANOTHER MOVIE, AND TELLING ANOTHER STORY, JUST ABOUT THAT.
Now this means that the entire character of John Galt as an actual human being, of course, is axed from the picture. Galt has no conflicts anyway, so he's not a very interesting character, nor a very plausible one. For the sake of the picture, lose him. You could lose the entire science-fiction aspect of the film, too, by axing the static-electricity motor because, again, that would be telling a different story.
See, if you want to include Galt and his motor, then axe the John Galt Line sequence and tell a story about a businesswoman who needs to find the man who built this motor. That, too, could be a more narrowly focused story, but then the producer and the writer(s) have to stick to telling THAT and not a whole bunch of other stories at the same time.
You can get away with that in a novel, because it isn't generally the plot, or character traits that unify long novels but the THEME; so long as a subplot expresses the theme of the novel, it will appear integral to the story. Screenwriting, however, is VERY different from novel writing, and requires much more of a selective focus. Dramatic writing requires establishing a goal for the main character ("a goal", not "many goals"), positing the question in Act I: will our hero achieve this goal? then throwing a bunch of obstacles in the way of the hero to test his or her resolve in achieving the goal, as well as to test a particular trait ("integrity", "honesty", "shiftiness", "resourcefulness", "hatred of conformity", whatever) that concisely defines that character.
That means, of course, when writing a screenplay adapted from a novel, that one must sit down and before starting to write, one has to make some very hard editorial decisions: basically, WHAT TO LEAVE OUT.
Then, at least, you'll have something that is recognizably a "movie" rather than a transcription of a novel into a photoplay.
Needless to say, such a process would also obviate the need for a compliance office like David Kelley, since the writers would now be focused on telling a concrete story by means of concrete actions, with a single concrete goal for its lead character, rather than "teaching a philosophy to an audience," which is what Kelley, et al., seemed to have in mind. As I mentioned in another post, the writers needn't worry about the theme of Atlas Shrugged. By focusing on a much narrower story (e.g., just the struggle to build the John Galt Line, which could very easily be a dramatically satisfying 2-hour movie), the theme will emerge on its own just be presenting the character, her main traits, her choices in behavior and actions, the kinds of obstacles antagonists throw at her, and the wan in which she responds to those obstacles.
The theme will be there. You don't have worry over telling it explicitly.
If you really do want to send a message . . . go to Western Union.
When I read the book for the first time, I skimmed that speech. I read it slowly on the second reading. I think it is a good description of the philosophy of the book. But that does not mean it has to go in the movie at all. I like the idea of it as an optional add-on in the DVD, even then it should be cut. Can the audience concentrate for that long? Well in my circle -yes for My Kitchen Rules and Lord of the Rings, but -no for anything else. People watch movies for the story, not to see a college lecture. Any message must come thru the story. If it does not, it fails.
Optimistically, from what I know of the record of the scriptwriting team, their judgment will be good.
Nice scapegoat. Blame the budget. Little known secret: ultimately, the commercial success of a movie is determined by WORD OF MOUTH, not advertising and marketing. The old French film, "A Man and a Woman" had no marketing budget; it spread only by word of mouth, and played in theaters for something like a solid year.
Small films like "Twelve Angry Men" had little or no marketing budget because they had little or no production budget, period. It was a successful film and became a classic because the writing, casting, and directing were all excellent.
>> there have been any number of movies that were much worse stories poorly told that sold better.
And many movies that had even smaller production and marketing budgets that sold better . . . because they were better movies and people talked about them a lot.
>>>On ASII, suffered from the same issue AND the change of actors,
Well, but that's part of what I mean. The whole project appears to have been done in a very amateurish, even haphazard way. If you're going to do something downright dangerous for the life of the film, like split it into 3 parts with a year or two of production in between each part, then you had better spend LOTS of time up front, before any lensing, to get the writing tight, the casting perfect, and the directing imaginative and daring (good grief, I can't tell you how often I winced every time there was a scene in AS-I in which the actors would simply speak their lines to one another, doing nothing but standing in front of one another. Do people in real life even do that? No, not really. I mean, don't you DO SOMETHING when you speak to someone else: tie your shoes; light a cigarette; straighten papers on the desk; put money away in a safe . . . something? anything? Some of the most wooden, acting-class-level directing I've ever seen in feature film. It was a filmed version of the audio-book version of the novel.)
Instead, the producers seem to have been very cavalier about the whole thing from the get-go: "If it doesn't work in Part I, it's no problem! We'll just fire everyone and recast the whole lot of them! The audience can't help but notice, of course, but they'll accept it, because in our opinion, the story of Atlas Shrugged is bigger than any particular casting choice" (I believe Harmon Kaslow even said something almost identical in a Reason Magazine interview some time ago). My opinion: utterly irresponsible of them to approach the project in this manner.
>>>there were constraints on contractual issues, which may have contributed.
Big deal. This is Hollywood. This is movie making. There are always "constraints on contractual issues"; there's no escaping them. It's simply part of the proverbial "cost of doing business." Besides, there were no stars in the picture, so what sort of real contractual constraints could there have been? Most of these actors were dying to be in a feature film with nationwide theatrical release. No, the real constraints were the egos of the producers, who believed they simply had to get the film made and distributed — no matter what — by April 15, Tax Day, in order to make a political statement. THAT was the constraint.
By way of comparison, watch the special DVD on the production of "Gone With the Wind" that is included in the 75th Anniversary Edition of the DVD. It presents a very complete history of David O Selznick's involvement in the project. In some ways, of course, he ruined some of the film by taking some great writing by a noted playwright of the day (Sidney Howard), throwing it out, and adapting many scenes himself directly from Martha Mitchell's novel. You can sort of see his heavy-handed touch, especially in scenes toward the end that virtually "telegraph" what the climax of the scene itself is going to be. However, the really significant thing about that special DVD is the story of how Selznick came to cast just the people he did: Vivien Leigh (practically unknown in the US at the time), Clark Gable, Leslie Howard, Olivia de Havilland, etc. Selznick took well over a year just to decide who would be cast, and he even turned his indecision into a marketing "buzz", running contests and questionnaires in the press to see who people thought would be the leads (the novel had already been a popular hit for a few years, so people were looking forward to a movie version, and quite excited by their own notions of who should play the various leading roles). Heck, that's marketing! Even before a single frame of film was shot, there was already lots of buzz!
I mention this only to drive home the point that when making a movie, you cannot be cavalier about any part of it, certainly not the casting. You cannot say, "Don't worry. If the talent can't pull it off in Part I, we'll just cast new people in Part II."
That is utterly irresponsible.
1) All movies are educational. You just have to learn how to read them, and therefore, how to learn from them.
2) Since you've already read AS (probably many times) there's not much that a movie version could teach you that wasn't already in the book and your prior experience with it as a novel; presumably, you've already learned the lessons before buying a ticket for the movie version. Furthermore, since the consensus here seems to favor the idea of a literal transcription of the book (including, by implication, David Kelley's role as philosophical compliance officer during production to ensure the literalness of the final outcome) that pretty much guarantees from the get-go that the movie SHALL NOT (indeed, MUST NOT) contain any point of view, or hint, or suggestion, of the director's personal ideas on anything, that wasn't already in the novel and which had not passed review by David Kelley. Those were the things you could have learned something new from (that you might have rejected some new, personal, unexpected point of view from the screenwriter or the director is irrelevant. It's often as valuable to reject what we learn as it is to accept it).
Very amusing. That's the way films were made in tyrannies such as the former Soviet Union.
>>I see a movie as a learning tool, not some adventure that is over and gone in the blink of an eye.
Interesting. Rand herself preferred adventure stories that were over and gone in the blink of any eye (not to mention very light-operetta, light marches, light rinky-tink Scott Joplin rags, etc. She boasted about it, proudly calling it "tiddley-wink music."). You have very different tastes from hers. Anyway, she preferred the sense of life of stories like these over didactic education movies, and she understood how to read a film in terms of its subtext and symbolism.
>> The majority of the public nowadays views it differently.
The majority views it differently only "nowadays"? You mean, in days past, the public flocked to high-brow educational movies? I don't think so. The public always liked movies that were entertaining. That meant, even in the cases of adaptation, that the final purpose of the film was to "entertain", i.e., give the audience a good excuse for staring at a screen with flickering images on it for 2 hours without getting bored and getting up and leaving (many do that anyway, in spite of a filmmakers' best efforts to the contrary).
>>>They see a movie as an inexpensive joyride to an alternate dimension
They've got television and the Internet for that; movies are no longer inexpensive.
>>> that they may never visit, but gain the joy of seeing it come and go. Those movies can be exciting at times, but I find greater joy in something long-lasting. It is all a matter of opinion.
There was nothing long-lasting in Atlas Shrugged the Movie because you've already read the book, knew the characters, know the plot, know who John Galt is, and you already know the ending. There's nothing educational for you about watching the movie. What you were hoping for — what we all were — was to experience precisely that sort of excitement in AS as a pure adventure story; the sort of thing you dismiss as being beneath you. Alas, the filmmakers didn't pull it off because they didn't approach the project from the standpoint of making a movie; they approached it from the standpoint of presenting Ayn Rand's novel as a literal photoplay.
The public did that already by means of the box-office. That's why the movie bombed. If Duncan Scott doesn't get THAT message, nothing I or anyone else could tell him would change his mind.
Then the speech droned on for 70+ pages. I found myself feeling like I was in a communist country hearing Castros 5 hour stem winders. I actually skipped ahead in the book to read the fallout. We'd come so far in the story. Experiencing Dagny's time in the gulch, searching for the motor, struggling with the powers that be. The speech was extreme overkill and preachy. In a book that could say so much in a thrifty manner. The speech was way too much. The movie should find some way to refine it. Because its the only part of AS that was boring.
Cclem AKA
-- DA Flint "night of jan. 16th"
On ASII, suffered from the same issue AND the change of actors, I personally, didn't think were good. the first Harry Potter's sucked. the same actors continued and the movie making continued. no expert on movie making, but directors were changed as in this series. there were constraints on contractual issues, which may have contributed. Own the rights, OWN the influence, Darren
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