Opinion Needed: Callused and heartless or interesting
I had an idea for either my current book or a future story that I'm told is calloused and potentially mean-spirited. I don't quite agree with the assessment so i'm hoping to run it by the Gulch to see what other level-headed people think.
Considering the headlines on genetic tinkering, what if things like dwarfism, downs, albino-ism, etc were all the result genetic tinkering in the distant past by a culture seeking immortality before they were destroyed? What if their work was unfinished when their end came and the gene defects were passed forward through what was left of humanity.
Mean-spirited? Calloused? Interesting?
Considering the headlines on genetic tinkering, what if things like dwarfism, downs, albino-ism, etc were all the result genetic tinkering in the distant past by a culture seeking immortality before they were destroyed? What if their work was unfinished when their end came and the gene defects were passed forward through what was left of humanity.
Mean-spirited? Calloused? Interesting?
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I'd like to see a good creative exploration of the purpose of the yawn. Moreover, why is it that echokinetic yawning does not occur in children under 5, people with autism, psychopaths, and sociopaths? I'd devour insights into the yawn question without any concern for the feelings of others. What is the biological imperative for a yawn such that it spans so many species? Evolutionary fluke, energy field synchronization, oxygen to the brain, or unexplained behavior genetically engineered by ancient super-scientists?
End result? Usually murdering monsters.
As for reality, Adolf Hitler had a thing for a genetically controlled race of Teutonic blonds that did not reach full fruition.
More murdering monsters.
What's becoming of the USA (along with science)?
I've seen more than one science fiction monster movie end with the following--
The End?
[Calloused or Callused?
By Maeve Maddox
In its literal sense the adjective callous is used to describe parts of the skin that are hardened by constant friction or pressure. Used figuratively it refers to insensitive behavior, or hardness of the mind.
A variant spelling of callous is callus. This spelling is usually seen in connection with body parts:
Used literally, the spellings are interchangeable. A foot may be either calloused or callused.
When using the adjective in a figurative sense, however, stick to callous and its forms: a callous person, calloused behavior.]
If your work is fiction then I don't see how anyone could find it offensive unless you work hard to reach an offensive conclusion!
Not Crichton. He wrote it.
As an author it's up to you whether your them is mean spirited or Devine.
Any emotional inferences are added by people and are not facts.
Using that as a meter stick on whether or not to write a story that you want to write is letting mob emotion trump reason.
It is your call in any case, however if its a story you want to tell conciously or not, you WILL tell it at some point regardless.
If the story is pushing you, by all means tell it.
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